Soch

Jub Bhi Tum Atay Ho
Ek Soch Nae De Jaty Ho

wah..ye tumhari poetry hai..keep writing janab.
AGAR YE AISE HOTA..

سنوجب کبھی بھی تم آتے ہو
ایک سوچ نئی دے جاتے ہو

bohat achi poetry is bar apki poetry mai design krti hon Taimoor ko rehne do jo tum se fee mangta hai desiging ki
per itna bata do jo tum ne likhi wo kron ya jo CM ne thek ki hai wo design kron ?

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Originally Posted by CaLmInG MeLoDy

wah..ye tumhari poetry hai..keep writing janab.
AGAR YE AISE HOTA..

سنوجب کبھی بھی تم آتے ہو
ایک سوچ نئی دے جاتے ہو

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o see am baji
me ne bhi ye kabhi wala socha tha
mgr nae jee
kabhi ka to koi sawal e nae
ye to roz bal k her pal anay waly k lye likha gya
so essay aisay e rehny do

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Originally Posted by Gorgeous Princess

bohat achi poetry is bar apki poetry mai design krti hon Taimoor ko rehne do jo tum se fee mangta hai desiging ki
per itna bata do jo tum ne likhi wo kron ya jo CM ne thek ki hai wo design kron ?

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o wa meri cheeti
raho aap jeeti

karao karo design
but original wali e karna

explain me ker chuki
@Rana Taimoor Ali
or aap mango fees :P

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Originally Posted by Killer Attitude

o see am baji
me ne bhi ye kabhi wala socha tha
mgr nae jee
kabhi ka to koi sawal e nae
ye to roz bal k her pal anay waly k lye likha gya
so essay aisay e rehny do



o wa meri cheeti
raho aap jeeti

karao karo design
but original wali e karna

explain me ker chuki
@Rana Taimoor Ali
or aap mango fees :P

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ha ha ha ha thek hai ab dekhna kesa design krti hon :)

عمدہ اور معیاری۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔

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Originally Posted by Gorgeous Princess

bohat achi poetry is bar apki poetry mai design krti hon Taimoor ko rehne do jo tum se fee mangta hai desiging ki
per itna bata do jo tum ne likhi wo kron ya jo CM ne thek ki hai wo design kron ?

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Tumhari bohat he zabardast qisam ki pitai honi chaye P:P:P:P:

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Originally Posted by Killer Attitude

o see am baji
me ne bhi ye kabhi wala socha tha
mgr nae jee
kabhi ka to koi sawal e nae
ye to roz bal k her pal anay waly k lye likha gya
so essay aisay e rehny do



o wa meri cheeti
raho aap jeeti

karao karo design
but original wali e karna

explain me ker chuki
@Rana Taimoor Ali
or aap mango fees :P

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Thek hai ji karwao design ap Bewafa log =((=((

waaah ........... bahut khooob

bht umda

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Originally Posted by Gorgeous Princess

ha ha ha ha thek hai ab dekhna kesa design krti hon :)

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karo je karo
i am waiting

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Originally Posted by intelligent086

عمدہ اور معیاری۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔

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Shukriyaaaa

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Originally Posted by Abu Affan

waaah ........... bahut khooob

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Shukriyaaaa

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Originally Posted by Urdu Tehzeb

bht umda

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Shukriyaa Janab

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Originally Posted by Rana Taimoor Ali

Tumhari bohat he zabardast qisam ki pitai honi chaye P:P:P:P:




Thek hai ji karwao design ap Bewafa log =((=((

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Hahahahahaah @Gorgeous Princess
Maza agya

To aapko kis ne kaha tha
k fees mango mjh se

Commerce walon ki PR chk kro

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Originally Posted by Killer Attitude

Shukriyaaaa

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mujh se kaha .............???

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Originally Posted by Abu Affan

mujh se kaha .............???

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Jee aap ki tareef ka shukriyaa kiya

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Originally Posted by Rana Taimoor Ali

Tumhari bohat he zabardast qisam ki pitai honi chaye P:P:P:P:




Thek hai ji karwao design ap Bewafa log =((=((

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ha ha ha kyun tap rahe ho hamesha tum design krte ho is bar mujhe krne do :)

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Originally Posted by Killer Attitude

Hahahahahaah @Gorgeous Princess
Maza agya

To aapko kis ne kaha tha
k fees mango mjh se

Commerce walon ki PR chk kro

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chalo dekh leta end per aao gi tu mere pass he tab hisab kitab krlon ga :P

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Originally Posted by Killer Attitude

Jee aap ki tareef ka shukriyaa kiya

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acha acha woh...... chalain teek hai phir

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Originally Posted by Gorgeous Princess

ha ha ha kyun tap rahe ho hamesha tum design krte ho is bar mujhe krne do :)

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Tap rha e to tapny do
bal k mazeeed tapayo

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Originally Posted by Rana Taimoor Ali

chalo dekh leta end per aao gi tu mere pass he tab hisab kitab krlon ga :P

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khush fehmiyaaaaan

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Originally Posted by Abu Affan

acha acha woh...... chalain teek hai phir

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mention not

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Originally Posted by Killer Attitude

Tap rha e to tapny do
bal k mazeeed tapayo

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mai writing krli design bhi krrlon gi aj hath jamm nahi raha kuch

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Originally Posted by Gorgeous Princess

mai writing krli design bhi krrlon gi aj hath jamm nahi raha kuch

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=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=)):)):))

@Gorgeous Princess @Rana Taimoor Ali

GP RTA ko ignore karo
aap to bus designing pe concentrate karo

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Originally Posted by Rana Taimoor Ali

=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=)):)):))

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:|:|:|

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Originally Posted by Killer Attitude

@Gorgeous Princess @Rana Taimoor Ali

GP RTA ko ignore karo
aap to bus designing pe concentrate karo

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RTA hahaha mai samja Roads & Transport Authority ki baat ho rahi hai.............

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Originally Posted by Gorgeous Princess

:|:|:|

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Ignore kro

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Originally Posted by Abu Affan

RTA hahaha mai samja Roads & Transport Authority ki baat ho rahi hai.............

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Taimoor ko
RTA sirf me bula sakti hun
so no mazaq
BTW hum UTians essay e bulaty ek dsre ko
like i will call u AA

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Originally Posted by Killer Attitude

Taimoor ko
RTA sirf me bula sakti hun
so no mazaq
BTW hum UTians essay e bulaty ek dsre ko
like i will call u AA

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no mazaq means............????

sure u can call me AA

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Originally Posted by Abu Affan

no mazaq means............????

sure u can call me AA

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Means Taimoor ko RTA kehny per no mazaq

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Originally Posted by Killer Attitude

Means Taimoor ko RTA kehny per no mazaq

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jee bahut muazrat ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,so sorry

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Originally Posted by Abu Affan

jee bahut muazrat ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,so sorry

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its okay

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Originally Posted by Killer Attitude

its okay

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no worries .... ayenda koi aisi baat nahi hogi.... khush rahen

Gud.....Mazeed Shairi ka intizaar hy...................................:)

Aap isi me 5, 6 sher add kr k Ghazal mukammal kr sakti hain..............bas "Nai soch" ki zaroorat hy.........:P

@Pari dear
Me ek Shaira nahi hun
bilkul b nae
bus mood acha ho ya bura
us k according
soch ati hai
to ussy poetry me dhalny ki try ker deti hun

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Originally Posted by Nimra Rashid

@Pari dear
Me ek Shaira nahi hun
bilkul b nae
bus mood acha ho ya bura
us k according
soch ati hai
to ussy poetry me dhalny ki try ker deti hun

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koi baat nhi........................isi AAMAD pr loag shai'r ban jaty hain...............jesy k abhi aapky aik sher ko dekh kr ham pr aamad hoi....aapki ijazat k baghair aapky sher pr mazeed shairi.................:)


Jub Bhi Tum Atay Ho...
Ek Soch Nae De Jaty Ho

Tasweer K Har Manzar Me
Rang Naya Bhar Jatey Ho

khushk,banjar jazboon pr
Shabnam si Barsatey Ho

Murjhaey,Udaas chehroon ko
Taazgi Nai de Jatey Ho

Gham k pheeky lamho Me
Roshni Si bhar Jatey Ho

Na Umeedi k Baadloon me
Subha Nai De Jaty ho.......

Jab b Tum Aatey ho
Muntashir si Zaat ko
Mukammal kr Jatey ho....!!!!!!

Dedicated To Sweet, @Nimra Rashid

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Originally Posted by Pari

koi baat nhi........................isi AAMAD pr loag shai'r ban jaty hain...............jesy k abhi aapky aik sher ko dekh kr ham pr aamad hoi....aapki ijazat k baghair aapky sher pr mazeed shairi.................:)


Jub Bhi Tum Atay Ho...
Ek Soch Nae De Jaty Ho

Tasweer K Har Manzar Me
Rang Naya Bhar Jatey Ho

khushk,banjar jazboon pr
Shabnam si Barsatey Ho

Murjhaey,Udaas chehroon ko
Taazgi Nai de Jatey Ho

Gham k pheeky lamho Me
Roshni Si bhar Jatey Ho

Na Umeedi k Baadloon me
Subha Nai De Jaty ho.......

Jab b Tum Aatey ho
Muntashir si Zaat ko
Mukammal kr Jatey ho....!!!!!!

Dedicated To Sweet, @Nimra Rashid

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Wah Wah Wah
Kamal Sister

JazakAllah
4 dedication

bohat khoob , keep sharing ;)