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Veedoo
09-21-2016, 05:09 AM
Rabi ji ne buhat umda sher leekha socha design kar k un ko gift kar doon ,rabi jii passand aya tu zarror btana thanx

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Rana Taimoor Ali
09-21-2016, 09:26 AM
بہت ہی اچھا ڈیزائن ہے
شاعری کی املا میں تھوڑی غلطی لگ رہی ہے
"جزبات میں "ز" آتی ہے یا "ذ
آپ نے "ز " استعمال کی ہے

KhUsHi
09-21-2016, 02:25 PM
Buhat pyari sharing

Veedoo
09-21-2016, 07:12 PM
بہت ہی اچھا ڈیزائن ہے
شاعری کی املا میں تھوڑی غلطی لگ رہی ہے
"جزبات میں "ز" آتی ہے یا "ذ
آپ نے "ز " استعمال کی ہے



ab dekain maine teekh kar deya hai ,,,,?
ji bahi pata tah maine kisi se kelk main leekhwaya tah ,jab design pora ho geiya phir
ja k khayail aya hai k ek alfaz ki galti hai ,per ab wahaan kuch nei ho saktha taha .thanx

Rana Taimoor Ali
09-21-2016, 08:26 PM
ab dekain maine teekh kar deya hai ,,,,?
ji bahi pata tah maine kisi se kelk main leekhwaya tah ,jab design pora ho geiya phir
ja k khayail aya hai k ek alfaz ki galti hai ,per ab wahaan kuch nei ho saktha taha .thanx

haan ji aisa hota hai
Ruby apni poetry mai sub se pehle ye dekhti hai imlla ki galti na ho :P

Veedoo
09-21-2016, 08:38 PM
haan ji aisa hota hai
Ruby apni poetry mai sub se pehle ye dekhti hai imlla ki galti na ho :P
haan jii bdra muskil hotha hai bad main edit karna ;))) thanx ji

Daniel-7
09-21-2016, 09:18 PM
WOW!!! Superb!!! Brilliant presentation!!! Very artistic.

Veedoo
09-22-2016, 03:11 AM
thanx all friends

Abu Affan
09-22-2016, 07:25 PM
رنگوں کا حسین امتزاج دیکھ لگا کہ یہ کس کا کام ہے ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔
اچھے شعر کے ساتھ بہت بڑیا انصاف۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔

Abu Affan
09-22-2016, 07:26 PM
واڈا جی میرے لیے مائینڈ بلوئینگ سیگنیچر بنانے کے لیے بھی بہت بہت ممنون ہوں۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔

CaLmInG MeLoDy
09-23-2016, 08:35 AM
Arre wah wah wah. Veedoo sir ji ne mere sher main rang bhar diye. Jeeta jaagta sher ho gaya ye toh. Ek begtreen designer hi pietry ko jala bakhshta hai. So apne aisa hi kia. Bohot bohot shukria. Mere sher ko youn sajaane k liye. Khush reheiye.

CaLmInG MeLoDy
09-23-2016, 08:38 AM
Taimoor... shukria..wese mamin g ne tum se bhi pehle mujhe mere sher ki ghalti batla di thi. Magar tum ne batai. Toh aisa laga jese abhi jaa k tumhate mathe lag jaaoon. ;P .. mere blog ko sudhaaro.

Rana Taimoor Ali
09-23-2016, 10:42 AM
Taimoor... shukria..wese mamin g ne tum se bhi pehle mujhe mere sher ki ghalti batla di thi. Magar tum ne batai. Toh aisa laga jese abhi jaa k tumhate mathe lag jaaoon. ;P .. mere blog ko sudhaaro.
acha thek hai lag jao

aur blog se related tum se ek baat kahon ga
sub se pehle tum ek baat krne ka medium chose krlo
kabhi idher mesg aate hain kabhi fb per kabhi google pe tu kabhi twitter pe
tum ko pata hai mai mesg ka reply krne mai kabhi delay nahi karta
per reply tum read he nahi krti tu mai kia kron tumhara last mesg twiter pe aaya tha os k next day he reply krdiya tha ab pata nhi month hone ko hai os baat ko tum ne reply nahi kia tu mai kya kron
mujhe issue arahe hain kuch blog ki theme old hai bohat hai ose update krna hai manually , matlb cPanel mai khod se upload krni hogi aur cPanel thek se chal he nhi raha hosting walon ka masla

aur next time tum ne is bare mai koi bhi baat krni hogi wo gmail pee kro gi
aur tum ne ye mesg na read kia tu Mamin Mirza tumhare kaan khenche gi

Veedoo
09-24-2016, 03:53 AM
thanx alot my all friends

CaLmInG MeLoDy
09-30-2016, 04:58 PM
acha thek hai lag jao

aur blog se related tum se ek baat kahon ga
sub se pehle tum ek baat krne ka medium chose krlo
kabhi idher mesg aate hain kabhi fb per kabhi google pe tu kabhi twitter pe
tum ko pata hai mai mesg ka reply krne mai kabhi delay nahi karta
per reply tum read he nahi krti tu mai kia kron tumhara last mesg twiter pe aaya tha os k next day he reply krdiya tha ab pata nhi month hone ko hai os baat ko tum ne reply nahi kia tu mai kya kron
mujhe issue arahe hain kuch blog ki theme old hai bohat hai ose update krna hai manually , matlb cPanel mai khod se upload krni hogi aur cPanel thek se chal he nhi raha hosting walon ka masla

aur next time tum ne is bare mai koi bhi baat krni hogi wo gmail pee kro gi
aur tum ne ye mesg na read kia tu @Mamin Mirza (http://www.urdutehzeb.com/member.php?u=33) tumhare kaan khenche gi
tumhari bat theek hai taimoor..sawal poochi ke main khud la pata ho jati hon.par pehle tum jawab de kar.yahan update kar dete the ke fb check karo.ya gmail.ya twitter..ab tum yahan update nahi karte.. khair.........main check karti hon twitter... aur Mamin Mirza ji se kaan khinchwaana.aur daant khaana.ye mera man pasand mashghala hai..kisi aise kaam se daraaow.jis se mujhe dar lagta ho.P:

CaLmInG MeLoDy
09-30-2016, 04:59 PM
thanx alot my all friends
shukria sir ji.wo ap ke refrence se aik new mod aaye the.wo dobara online hi nahi aaye..

Abu Affan
10-01-2016, 08:52 PM
واڈا جی کونسے موڈ کو لے کے ائے تھے اپ ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔؟؟؟

Aqibimtiaz786
10-02-2016, 06:29 PM
Veedoo Bhai Jitni B Tareef krenApk Text Ki Kum h Umdaaaa Nd Great Poetry nd Placement Pr Image me Girl ka Bazuu Nanga h Kheyal kia kren Bhai Hamen Kehte hen r aj Ap ne Ye Use ki So Sad Kher Next Time Caie Dn't Mind Pr Muje Design Bht Psnd Aya Realy Thums Up...........bath:;))

Veedoo
10-02-2016, 07:43 PM
@Veedoo (http://www.urdutehzeb.com/member.php?u=651) Bhai Jitni B Tareef krenApk Text Ki Kum h Umdaaaa Nd Great Poetry nd Placement Pr Image me Girl ka Bazuu Nanga h Kheyal kia kren Bhai Hamen Kehte hen r aj Ap ne Ye Use ki So Sad Kher Next Time Caie Dn't Mind Pr Muje Design Bht Psnd Aya Realy Thums Up...........bath:;))
thanx per bahi jii bazoo naromal hai kanda ager naga ho tu acha nei lagta

Aqibimtiaz786
10-03-2016, 03:02 AM
Muje abi b yd h mre 2 design me b same yehi cheez c ap ne Bht Sakhti se Danta m oskay bd esa kam nhi kia pr agr seniour esa kren to dukh hta h na khud amal nhi krna r advice b dni kher Sir apka view h mujhe ap ne jo btaya wo m ne View Pesh kia bazoo naga ki bt ki Shoulder ki nhi i think mre design me b Mind nhi krna bcz ap mind b jldi krte hen ra View h Khush rahe.........

Veedoo
10-22-2016, 01:54 AM
Muje abi b yd h mre 2 design me b same yehi cheez c ap ne Bht Sakhti se Danta m oskay bd esa kam nhi kia pr agr seniour esa kren to dukh hta h na khud amal nhi krna r advice b dni kher Sir apka view h mujhe ap ne jo btaya wo m ne View Pesh kia bazoo naga ki bt ki Shoulder ki nhi i think mre design me b Mind nhi krna bcz ap mind b jldi krte hen ra View h Khush rahe.........
thanx per apne design ko ek bar phir dekh loo,

intelligent086
10-23-2016, 02:43 AM
بہت عمدہ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔

Veedoo
10-31-2016, 05:52 AM
بہت عمدہ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔


thanx alot ji