Meri pahli proper Ghazal ............ tujh se ghafil nahi yadoo ko ghum khar rakhta hon

[illusionist]

tujh se ghafil nahi yadoo ko ghum khar rakhta hon


tujh se ghafil nahi yadoo ko ghum khar rakhta hon
mai to putt jhar kay patton ko dil-e-yaar rakhta hon

mujh ko hain yaad ab tak rang saray bahar kay
mai yahan khud ko tanha, yun hi gulzar rakhta hoon

or jo to dai gaya khoon rung, judaii k mujhe ko
dikhlaaonga kabhi dunya ko,shahkaar rakhta hoon

hai teri hi muhabbat se saji meri zindagi
teri ulfat ki batton sai main mehkar rakhta hon

hashiyaari meri he itni, yaa maira bhola pun
jo gaeye choR ,un se hi sarokaar rakhta hoon

khoon rulata hon dil ko tanha teri judai mei
hansta hon mehfilon main shakl-e-funkar rakhta hon

khud hi se mai ye aksar poochlaita hoon meer
woh nahin maira, kion khud ko talabgaar rakhta hoon.

[fareena]

pehli ghazal hai to bht hi khoob hai kahs ker k ye ashaar

khoon rulata hon dil ko tanha teri judai mei
hansta hon mehfilon main shakl-e-funkar rakhta hon

khud hi se mai ye aksar poochlaita hoon meer
woh nahin maira, kion khud ko talabgaar rakhta hoon.

[illusionist]

pehli ghazal hai to bht hi khoob hai kahs ker k ye ashaar

khoon rulata hon dil ko tanha teri judai mei
hansta hon mehfilon main shakl-e-funkar rakhta hon

khud hi se mai ye aksar poochlaita hoon meer
woh nahin maira, kion khud ko talabgaar rakhta hoon.


Nawaazish G ./............

[fareena]

Nawaazish G ./............

:) ...................

[Anmol]

bht khoob...

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[Ria]

wo nahi mera, q khud ko talbgar rakhta houn...
very nice

[UmerAmer]

Very Nice
Keep it up

[illusionist]

Very Nice
Keep it up


Thanks Bro

[CaLmInG MeLoDy]

be intihaa behtreen..

aap itne ache poet hai mujhe pehle maloom nahi tha.