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    Thread: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے

      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے
      داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری


      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے


      اب آپ کی باری


      Last edited by Mamin Mirza; 01-09-2016 at 10:24 AM.
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by sweet_lily View Post
      Ta-dam-e-marg hai yak tarfa muhabbat
      Aatish-e-la-mehdood, Azaab-e-musalsal
      Matt kar intizar-e-yaar itna Be-sabar ho kar Ay dil-e-Nadaan,
      Wo masrofiyat se wabasta loog hain,Yaad karne main waqat barbad nahi karty.


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      Matt kar intizar-e-yaar itna Be-sabar ho kar Ay dil-e-Nadaan,
      Wo masrofiyat se wabasta loog hain,Yaad karne main waqat barbad nahi karty.
      Wah kia bat hai


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      Matt kar intizar-e-yaar itna Be-sabar ho kar Ay dil-e-Nadaan,
      Wo masrofiyat se wabasta loog hain,Yaad karne main waqat barbad nahi karty.

      hal ye hai k teri yad mai gum hon esai

      Sab ko meri, mujh ko teri padi rehti hai



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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      یا رات نے پہنی ہے ملاحت تِری تن پر
      یا دِن تِرے اندازِ صباحت پہ گیا ہے
      Peche bandhe hain hath aur shart hai safar ki,
      Kis se kahon k paon se kanta nikal dey …


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Ubaid View Post

      hal ye hai k teri yad mai gum hon esai

      Sab ko meri, mujh ko teri padi rehti hai
      Tumhi Se Rooth Kar Tum Ko Musalsal Dekhta Hu'n Me,
      Mujhe To Theek Se Naraaz Hona Bhi Nahi Aata.


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Ubaid View Post
      Wah kia bat hai
      Shukriya


      ghutan phr kis trah kam ho k choty se ghrondy mae,
      Kahen hum khwab rakhty haen kahen ta'beren rakhty haen


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by CaLmInG MeLoDy View Post
      Udaasi, Shaam, Tanhaai, Kasak, Yaado'n Ki Be'Chaini ..
      Mujhe Sab Sonp Ker Suraj Utar Jaata Hy Paani Me..!!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Raah dekho gey, hamara intezar karo gey
      Jab nahi honge hum to hamein yaad karogey

      dhondhogey ujrrey rishtoon mein wafa ke khazane
      tum mere bad meri mohabbat ka ehteram karogey
      na janay kb se dill mae hy ye amal jari,
      Zara c thes lagti hy buhat sa toot jata hun,


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      na janay kb se dill mae hy ye amal jari,
      Zara c thes lagti hy buhat sa toot jata hun,
      Ek Bewafa Ko Hum Ne Is Dil Mein Jaga Di Thi
      Khuwbon Ki Dunya Us Se Saja Di Thi

      Chaha Tha Us Ko Humne Khud Se Bhi Bohat
      Us Chahat Mein Humne Ye Hasti Hi Mita Di Thi


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