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Sab sy pehly to UT ka bohat sukrya k uno ny muje atni azat de , Bohat acha laga ap sab ki desiging dekh k
sab ny apny apny hisab sy bherpoor kosish ki ha ,Aap sab sy guzarish ha k kisi baat ko dil kr nahe lena balky
tanqeed ko learning ka hisa smjna ha , sab sy bari baat ha k ap sab ny kosish ki aor Contest me hisa liya
asy he mehnat krty rahain gy to kaam me nikhaar zaror aay ga , Comments aor Numbers sirf is liye diye ja
rahy hain k ap apny kaam ko mazeed behter kr sakain


Rana Taimoor Ali

Bohat achi kosish ki ha ap ny ,kuch baatain
Aor dehan me rakhain gy to mazeed behtri aay
Ge kaam me
Frame piece ko ap ny as is use kiya ha , is me creativity dekhai ja skti the , Frame k corners
Sahi sy cut nahe hoy , frame k inner side me
Jo decorative victor ya brush use kiya us ka istamal bohat acha ha lakin ap ny ha us ko
stretch kr diya ha
sada sa BG acha create kiya ha , image ki selection
achi ha ,lakin image mixing me behtri ki gunjaish ha
Text pr ap ki mehnat nazar aa rahi ha bohat achy
Sy frame k sath match kiya ha , text ko Bevel emboss thora kam dena chaye tha ,drop shadow ,me Distance ap ny zayada diya ha is ko thora
Kam hota to text zayada behter lagh skta tha
Over all presentation achi ha , upper side me ap
K pas kafi jaga the jaha poet name ko aor behter
Set kiya ja skta tha

7.5

Gorgeous Princess
Bohat achi kosish ha , Frame work bohat acha ha ,plus point k ap ny frame me creativity
Show ki ha frame k corners bi set hain ,
BG pr bi mehnat show ho rahi ha ,Frame theme k sath GB theme bohat achi set ki ha
Image selection bi achi ha , image mixing bi achi ha ,lakin image ko thora sa bottom me
Move kiya jata to behter laghta kyu k bottom me khali jaga sahi nahe lagh rahi
Text effects achy lagy , Poet name ko ager different colour aor effects deti to aor behter laghta
Over all presentation achi ha , aik cheez jis ka kheyal rakha chaheye wo yeh k Frame log ki setting
Asi ho k wo image k paaon me nahe aay

8.5


Jamil Mirza

Bohat achi kosish ha , Jo frame piece diya geya tha us ki finishing fine nahe the lakin ap ny us ko colour dy kr behter kiya ha that is good ,corners are properly cut hain
Lakin aap frame me aor creativity dekha skty thy ,
GB achi look day raha ha , lakin ager ap bg ko Flip horizontal kr dety to text light shade pr aata jo achi look deta
Text bohat acha banaya ha , lakin ap ny poetry ko nasar ki trha kyu likha ?
Title pr ap ki mehnat nazar aa rahi ha
Over all designing achi ha lakin presentation
Shyri ko nasar ki trha likhny sy sahi nahe lagh rahi

7.3

UmerAmer

Ap ny frame corners ki cutting to achi ki ha lakin ap ny un ki setting theek nahe ki ,dono me
Sy aik corner ap ko select kr k usi ko 4 sides pr lana chaye tha
GB bilkul sada rakha ha ap ny , Text ki setting honi chaye the , shyri ko hamesha shyri k
Andaz me likha jata ha , jana shyri khatam ho rahi ha waha he ap ny shyr ka name bi day diya ha
Shyr ka naam alagh sy line me diya karain
Text ko Bg k bajay frame colour theme sy math krny ki kosish kiya karain
Over all achi try ha kosish krty rahain aor himmat nahe harni inshaAllah jald aap ki designing bohat
Behter ho jay ge .Numbers dekh k ghabrana nahe ,bari baat contest me entry dena hota ha aor kosish
Krna hota ha

5.0

$low Poision

Achi kosish ha ,Frame corners ki cutting to behter ki ha lakin ap ka frame jaha jahan sy joint hoa ha wo sahi nahe hoa , sab joints show ho rahy hain , inner frame show kr raha ha k aap me creativity ha ,kosish jaari
Rakhaain
BG pr bi ap ny try ki ha , text sahi sy show nahe ho raha colour change hony chaye thy
Logo ko ap ny compress kr diya ha
Name ki placement theek nahe ha
Kosish jaari rakhain in sha Alllah mehnat karain gy to bohat behtri aay ge J

5.5

Zimal
Bohat achi kosish ha , Frame me ap ny creativity dekhany ki kosish ki ha that is good , Frame ki outer side pr kafi stuff reh geya ha jo ap ny clean nahe kiya ,
Bg acha use kiya ha , kosish kiya karain k jaha text aana ha wahan bg k colours balance hon k
Text sahi sy show ho saky ,
Bg k sath image acha lagh raha ha lakin kuch jaga sy bg sy mix nahe hoa
Text acha ha lakin Bevel and emboss thora kam hona chaye tha

Kafi jaga khali the us hisab sy Name placement aor behter ho skti the
Over all achi presentation ha , kosish jaari rakhain aor behtri aay ge )

6.5

CaLmInG MeLoDy

Ap ny bi achi kosish ki ha , Frame corners ki cutting theek sy nahe hoi , aor frame k joints bi visible hain
Outer border achi look day raha ha
Bg acha ha , Image selection achi ha lakin image ki cutting theek nahe hoi aor mixing me bi mehnat krni
Pary ge
Text acha banaya tha lakin stroke bohat ,text ki placement set nahe lagh rahi zayada upper kr diya ha ap ny
Kosish krty rahain In shAllah kaam me behtri aay ge

6.0

Ager mery comments aor numbering ki waja sy koi hurt hoa ho to muaffi chahti hun
khush rahain aor Allah ap k kaam memazeed nikhar day Aameen
Walaikum salam. MashaAllah..MashaAllah..UT pe toh char chand lag gaye hain..sitaare jagmaga rahe hain.. . umeed sab se pehle toh UT pe aamad ke liye be had shukria. is ke baad aap ka ye bhi shukria ke aap ne hamari request par hamain join kia. aur aap tamaam hi logon ne itni mehnat ke sath comments taiyaar karne ke liye time nikaala aur valuable marking and remarking ki. aur participants ki guftgu se ap ne andaza laga liya hoga. ham tamaam log aap sab logon ki is kaawish par kis qadar khush hain.. is field main hamain ap logon ke comments ki waja se kafi kuch seekhne ko mile ga. aap ki aamad, joing and every single act ka be had shukria.

baki meri post pe ap ke comments. these comments are so golden for me. I appriciate every single word of you. bohot acha lage ga agar aap log hamare designer section ko visit karain.. aur wahan mojood designes par aahista aahista jaise jaise aap ko fursat mile..apni raaiye dain. so that aghlaat durust ho sakain ham sab ki. ham sab hi yahan learner hain. toh ap log ham sab ko acha guide kar skte hain.thnks.