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Sab sy pehly to UT ka bohat sukrya k uno ny muje atni azat de , Bohat acha laga ap sab ki desiging dekh k
sab ny apny apny hisab sy bherpoor kosish ki ha ,Aap sab sy guzarish ha k kisi baat ko dil kr nahe lena balky
tanqeed ko learning ka hisa smjna ha , sab sy bari baat ha k ap sab ny kosish ki aor Contest me hisa liya
asy he mehnat krty rahain gy to kaam me nikhaar zaror aay ga , Comments aor Numbers sirf is liye diye ja
rahy hain k ap apny kaam ko mazeed behter kr sakain


Rana Taimoor Ali

Bohat achi kosish ki ha ap ny ,kuch baatain
Aor dehan me rakhain gy to mazeed behtri aay
Ge kaam me
Frame piece ko ap ny as is use kiya ha , is me creativity dekhai ja skti the , Frame k corners
Sahi sy cut nahe hoy , frame k inner side me
Jo decorative victor ya brush use kiya us ka istamal bohat acha ha lakin ap ny ha us ko
stretch kr diya ha
sada sa BG acha create kiya ha , image ki selection
achi ha ,lakin image mixing me behtri ki gunjaish ha
Text pr ap ki mehnat nazar aa rahi ha bohat achy
Sy frame k sath match kiya ha , text ko Bevel emboss thora kam dena chaye tha ,drop shadow ,me Distance ap ny zayada diya ha is ko thora
Kam hota to text zayada behter lagh skta tha
Over all presentation achi ha , upper side me ap
K pas kafi jaga the jaha poet name ko aor behter
Set kiya ja skta tha

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Ager mery comments aor numbering ki waja sy koi hurt hoa ho to muaffi chahti hun
khush rahain aor Allah ap k kaam memazeed nikhar day Aameen
ap ka behad shukriya ap humare forum mai tashreef lai aur marking k liye time nikala ap ne bohat bareki se meri aur baki designers ke designs ko dekha aur mistakes find out ki mai frame ko as it is use kia mujhe nahi pata frame piece k sath aur bhi work hosakta hai haan g image asal mai mai pehle dosri use kr raha tha per end per aker wo kharab hogyi thi tu ye use ki is mai light bohat ziada thi is wajah se mixing mai masla aya Text per kaam horaha hai INSHAHALLAH jald behter ho jaye ga

ap k comments se koi hurt nahi hoa aur INSHALLAH na he koi hoga ap bas humari galtiyan sudharti rahen