I saw a land

[Dr Maqsood Hasni]

I SAW A LAND

I saw a land,
Where man was not man
But skin and dress alike man
Eating silver and gold
Drinking blood with cold
Ever looking at more
Honey words in oily mouth
But poison in thoughts
If man for eating and drinking,
Sweet and honey laugh
Laugh at man
That land wasn't for giving
Just for taking and taking

[BDunc]

V good

[UmerAmer]

Very Nice
Keep it up

[Dr Maqsood Hasni]

Allah bless both of you

[~KAYRA~]

this poem is

as sweettttt as honey

[Dr Maqsood Hasni]

oh my God
what a sweet response.
its ur goodness
really i'm thankful to u for this kind response
Allah bless you

[~KAYRA~]

oh my God
what a sweet response.
its ur goodness
really i'm thankful to u for this kind response
Allah bless you

thnkshhhh
b,cozzzzzzzzz
meeee toooo

as sweettttt as honey:Chore:

[Dr Maqsood Hasni]

Allah bless u