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$low Poision
08-24-2015, 06:49 PM
salam
bohot din baad online hon
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Veedoo
08-24-2015, 06:54 PM
buhat hi achi koshish hai jii ,bas jjiii bewafa na leekha karin koi or Alfaz use keya karin
koi apne mehboob koi befaa nahi kehta ,pata nahi kaya majboori ho gi ,,,,,,?
maind ni karna,,,
KhUsHi
08-24-2015, 09:04 PM
Buhat pyari sharing
Ainee
08-24-2015, 09:09 PM
Good poetry by u. And good design g
CaLmInG MeLoDy
08-25-2015, 01:13 PM
SAB kuch acha hai SP..ye background main kia koora karkit sajaay a hai :P
Yaad Rakhna to kher Wafa ki nishani hoti hy.................Sher thory Be Wazan lagey.........!!!lekin achi koshish hy....!!!!
Baqi Sher jitny dukhi ,ranjeeda or Yasiyat me liptey hoey hain............Text,Background utny hi shokh,chamakdaar rangoon me poetry k saath match nhi ho rahy....!!!
Nice effort...........!!!!!!
UmerAmer
08-25-2015, 03:06 PM
Zabardast
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